A block later I
saw my little blue house. Like I said,
not much, but mine. The only thing I
didn’t like about the place—other than the neighborhood pack of kids and dogs,
that is—was my own fault. Whenever I
came home, it was the same old story—pull partway in, get out to unlock and
open the gate, get back into the car, pull the rest of the way in, get out to
shut and lock the gate. Add opening the
garage door and parking, and the whole thing’s a trial, but it keeps the roving
missionaries out of my yard when I’m home and deters the burglars when I’m not.
Throwing my
duffle-purse onto the kitchen table, I was only thinking about hitting my bed,
or barring that, the sofa. My eyes had
other ideas. The damn message light was
blinking on my machine again. I thought
about ignoring it, but I knew I’d just lay in bed until I heard who
called. Curiosity doesn’t kill this cat,
unless you count being dead-tired.
Sighing my
frustration at my own anal-retentiveness, I pressed the button.
“Hi. I’d like to talk to someone about ordering
wedding favors. If you could call me
back with a price on about one-hundred packets in mauve, I’d really
appreciate…” I hit delete before I heard
the rest. My phonebook listing says
‘Almond, J.’ and it’s only listed in the residential part, so I can never
understand how stupid someone has to be to call me about nuts, but I get at
least a half-dozen calls like that a month.
I never call them back, and usually they buy a clue. Every once in a while I get an irate bitch
who calls screaming to talk to my manager.
I give those people the number to my ‘world headquarters’—1-800-BITEME.
If you want to play along, here's how it works: Pick any page of your manuscript ending in 7 (hence the page 27 from this book) and post a snippet from that page. Come back here and let me know so I can see your stuff and link to it at the bottom here. Share the love by linking back here. Simple.
And, again, you're going to finish this, right? Great snippet and great voice, B.E.!!
ReplyDeleteNot sure if I'm playing along today - but if I do, I'll let you know :)
I'd like to, Janet. I really do love this story. We'll see where I'm at when this year settles down a bit. ;o)
ReplyDeleteLove the snippet. Jordan's voice is great, and the details really made this feel real.
ReplyDeleteIf I can get to page seven of my manuscript by next Sunday, I'll definitely play along.